Love the story, its movement like wild water, the story coming together slowly, by the keys of the typewriter making impressions of letters forming words on a paper. Raven observing and nodding and cawing in approval.
I loved reading āShe who walks softlyāTania, Charles was portrayed beautifully and I my eyes are wet with the way you portrayed the loss, looking forward to more. Iām now going to read from your archives. I found your substack recommended by @juliegabrielli
Thank you Marika! Charles is based loosely on my great grandfather so I think that made it easier for me to bring that character to life. Julie is a great connector š
I absolutely loved it, Tania. I think it could definitely be a novel, the characters fleshed out, maybe more conversations illuminating their pasts and differences. I love the way you interspersed your favorite quotes from the greats into your story, too. Keep on writing, this is just a sample, we want more!
I like it Tania! Iād be curious to see where you take the story š
Thank you Kira!
Love the story, its movement like wild water, the story coming together slowly, by the keys of the typewriter making impressions of letters forming words on a paper. Raven observing and nodding and cawing in approval.
Thank you much Perry! It was fun seeing it come together.
Tania, Great read and you definitely have a gift for writing.
Aww, thank you Barbara. Happy that you enjoyed it.
I'm intrigued! Bring the full version to life!
š Intrigue is good! Thank you, Paul.
You are most welcome!
Very well done! Old souls are a fascinating and very real phenomenon. I look forward to more!
Thank you very much Janice! Ideas keep flowing to me so I guess Iām supposed to write a novel š
I loved reading āShe who walks softlyāTania, Charles was portrayed beautifully and I my eyes are wet with the way you portrayed the loss, looking forward to more. Iām now going to read from your archives. I found your substack recommended by @juliegabrielli
Thank you Marika! Charles is based loosely on my great grandfather so I think that made it easier for me to bring that character to life. Julie is a great connector š
I absolutely loved it, Tania. I think it could definitely be a novel, the characters fleshed out, maybe more conversations illuminating their pasts and differences. I love the way you interspersed your favorite quotes from the greats into your story, too. Keep on writing, this is just a sample, we want more!
So happy to hear you enjoyed it Marilyn! Thank you for reading. The novel will have all the conversations š